I've decided that, because I've messed up about 20 pictures in the inking stage and about 10 in the coloring stage, that I'd update my pictures before I ink/color. I realize most comments on here are 'OMG tats so kawaii!!!!!!!!11' but I'd appreciate any critique you can throw at me. I want to improve my art, and I need advice/critique to do that.
The picture I drew has ALL of Haruhi, but the paper in my art pad is 11"x 14", and my scanner is way smaller than that, so this will have to do. Sorry about the Japanese characters, they're difficult for me to draw. Hope you enjoy!

Comment, dammit! D<